Design Research Dissertation
22/9/2025 - 23/12/2025 Week 1 - Week 14
Komugi Uchibori / 0363900
Design Research Dissertation / Bachelor of Design (Hons) in Creative Media
TABLE OF CONTENTS
- MBI
- Submission
- Feedback sheet
- Reflection
MBI
Submission
- Task 1
- Task 2
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| Fig. 2 Mood board and references |
- Task 3
- Task 4
Fig. 5 Research for article publication
Feedback sheet
Fig. 6 Feedback sheet
Reflection
Overall this assignment took a lot of time to finish with corrections, which made me concentrate and improve my dissertation. I’m not used to writing academic papers, so it was tough to check the grammar and words without relying too much on AI (grammar correction). Also, since the sentences are complicated and discuss the relationship between the design elements and the dual-path theory’s underlying cognitive and affective pathway, I was struggling to get it in the right direction to avoid contradiction.
Through this assignment process, I learned how important feedback is to improve my ability and dissertation. Mr. Mike gave us very useful and detailed instructions. When I read it and tried to improve my sentences, I realized I was writing repetitive sentences with different words. I’m sure that there is a lack of concentration.
From these experiences and realizations, I found my weakness in my writing and concentration for long sentences. While the feedback from Mr. Mike was challenging for me but it transformed my initial impression into refined writing. I hope that what is developed through this revision process will serve as a crucial foundation for my future research.

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